Sunday, February 26, 2006

twister













light enters the distant corner
and she sees the familiar face
now, of the stranger
that she once shared the world with.

the audience applauds,
shouting and cheering
in glorious abandon-

she hears nothing
but faint whispers
muffled giggling
and sweet ramblings-
the air outside is cold,
but he is warm.
for her,
that is enough.

colors danced as the rhythm began
in careful, beating paces-
smiles and movements
beer and laughter-
eagerness
glaring brightness

A few moments
were all that they had-
intense stares
that shared secrets in silence -
(she never spoke that deep,
that whole...)
As their eyes conversed
without words,
she bared her soul.

He looks around,
and is pleased with what he sees
and he smiles as he hears them-
the loud, faceless crowd.
the crowd that she now resides in.

It was was rough and rowdy,
as he started the night.
but she did not mind;
she was someplace safe-

here,
in the the bittersweet shade
of a silent morning,

where her eyes
were all that his eyes could see
and her voice
was all that he chose to hear
and her smile
was all he wanted to need -
and happily ever after
seemed to step out of the fairy tale

loving
misleading
embracing them.

9 comments:

  1. Nifty piece! Love the imagery you offer! Completes the experience :)

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  2. thank you xfreakx!

    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by =)

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  3. Could picturise the scene. All I needed was a camera to shoot it. Will make for an emotionally intensive scene. It's ironical.
    That the audience for the performer could make the performer an audience while one in them become the performer. Makes sense?

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  4. the individualist-

    yes, I agree with you in the intensity of that scene, if ever there would be one.

    and somehow, though confusing, it does make sense.

    Thank you for taking time to read what I've written.

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  5. so incredibily tender, luanne. I love it, and relate to that 'knowing silence'.
    beautiful and graceful piece, thank you.

    :)

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  6. you express those feelings
    of intimacy
    (and the loss of it)
    so well
    thank you

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  7. It sounds like she's betrayed, but I can't tell. Is she protected? This is excellent. There are so many things to ponder.

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