Monday, February 06, 2006

symphony

encased
in morning melodies -
singing birds
moving feet
dripping dew...

I remain entranced
by your lovely tune.

you are the sound
of the rainbow
in my dreams...

beautifully haunting -
and nonexistent.
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6 comments:

  1. Marc2:10 AM

    Beautiful imagery :)

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  2. Anonymous Poet1:42 PM

    I really like the immediacy of this piece. Its stream-of-conscious character draws me right in. I am there, in that moment.


    Thanks.

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  3. floots11:51 PM

    loved it all
    but especially
    you are the sound of the rainbow in my dreams
    great piece

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  4. Fragmented4:31 PM

    thank you marco!

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  5. Fragmented4:31 PM

    thank you anonymous poet! =) I'm glad.

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  6. Fragmented4:31 PM

    thank you floots :) I'm glad you liked it.

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