Thursday, May 11, 2006

ethereal








I long
for pure
total
weightlessness -

understated
ecstacy

beyond the reach

of words
thoughts
feelings

right there,
in a distant
fragmented
dimension -

where I
become the wind

and forgiveness-

becomes me.

11 comments:

  1. Wow...great stuff. Very intense.

    In your pic, you look Filipina.

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  2. wow, breathtaking...."understated ecstacy" we are longing for the same thing!!
    beautiful.

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  3. This is one of my all time favorites.

    'understated ecstasy'

    Liked the play on words to contain a heightened feeling.

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  4. jon cox: Thank you! I love your artworks as well.

    the phoenix: Thanks for stopping by! I'm glad you liked it.

    Lorena: thank you... I hope we both find it... or on the other hand, I hope it both finds us, soon! :)

    mermaid: Thank you, I'm really glad that you like it :)

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  5. Luanne, this is an excellent poem!!Bravo!!

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  6. thank you so much pat! :)

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  7. another excellent write
    "where I
    become the wind

    and forgiveness -

    becomes me."

    loved it

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  8. "I long
    for pure
    total
    weightlessness -

    understated
    ecstacy"


    Wow. You extracted those words right out of my soul. How did you do that? Remakable.

    : )

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  9. Wow! Great work.

    "become the wind"
    yes you are
    poets live there--in that being
    you live it well

    "forgiveness
    becomes me."
    Beautiful!!

    Thank you for yours.

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  10. thank you floots, I'm glad you did.

    anonymous poet - Got it from mine. I guess we're kindred then... =)thank you for dropping by!

    ardi k - much thanks. It means alot =)

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  11. ethereal indeed, lovely....

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