Monday, April 03, 2006

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See me

Not through the mirror

But through my eyes

So that you may learn

Not the lies

Nor the estimation

Nor the impression

You have formed

From the freedom you took

To measure me...

Then shall you only

Truly understand

I am right when I say

You have not seen me

Not at all.

5 comments:

  1. I like the duplicity in this. I read this as someone seeing you, and you looking at yourself.

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  2. loved the pic
    (self portrait?)
    great poem
    liked the way that the eyes/lies rhyme drew me in

    widows of the soul
    and
    door to a fine poem :)

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  3. Floots beat me to the eyes being the window of the soul.

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  4. I love the raw honesty in this. We are all guilty of looking through "our" eyes and judging. Another good one Luanne!

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  5. Mmmmm . . . the mystery . . . What lies behind our eyes? Only each one of us really knows, do we?

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