pat: haha. I guess, you're right sir. thank you :)
floots: I like that line too. you see it as my heart does. thank you.
mermaid: it does hurt. I just hate being too vulnerable at times, but I have to agree, more than being a protection, these certain coating do obstruct your sight. thank you mermaid.
jon: thank you :)
jeut: yes, you're right. sometimes. :) thank you jeut.
marco: Thank you, sir :) I like what you said, 'ambiant warmth'. again, thank you.
I say that's when life gets good!! Excellent poem Luanne!!
ReplyDelete"the passion of luminous longing"
ReplyDeletelove that phrase
whether we're talking romance
or simple existence
it is what keeps us going
well written
cheers
Burning through the protective coating hurts, but it's also when we really began to see. I love this introspection.
ReplyDeleteI'd rather eat candy than have it melt. :-P
ReplyDeleteon a serious note... i guess that's why we have to control the flames of our luminous longings so we dont get burnt.
I love your blog's ambiant warmth.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
Marco
pat: haha. I guess, you're right sir. thank you :)
ReplyDeletefloots: I like that line too. you see it as my heart does. thank you.
mermaid: it does hurt. I just hate being too vulnerable at times, but I have to agree, more than being a protection, these certain coating do obstruct your sight. thank you mermaid.
jon: thank you :)
jeut: yes, you're right. sometimes. :) thank you jeut.
marco: Thank you, sir :) I like what you said, 'ambiant warmth'. again, thank you.